Slow down #1 crossing the creek

Run run Rachel run u have it so run, As i run with the flag it the other players after me and the forest rush by me and the horrible taste of bugs in my teeth cause i had been running with my mouth open and the niity gritty feeling in i my huge mouth! the as river was coming up in my path and i did on care cause  i was turning, But i was taking the turn i slipped on the murkie mud, and i feel into the light blue water but to me as i was falling into the river it looked like a whirlpool of death the us to be bright blue sky turned black with red eyes starring right at me, then i hurd the most gruesome noise i have ever hurd in my in tire life i hurd the my arm go crack, but instead of of the other kids asking if i was okay thy took the flag and ran with it and i was left there to float in pure pain and nummmess i lay there thinking my life is over but the i saw blood flood beside me, the blood float beside me then  goes into my mouth and the taste is very bed in my mouth, as my i lay there holding on to a branch with my limp arm that's was broken but i could not feel it, but there i could hear the camp counselors coming for started to yell Rachel ware are you ,i could feel my legs move after all i move my non broken arm and look at the time i was 6pm i had been here of 4 hrs, there you are the camp counselors pulled me out of the water and carried me to the loge on to a silk bed and fell a sleep.